lunes, 26 de noviembre de 2012

SOMETHING HAPPENED!!!!

Hi guys!!!

Our Christmas holidays are getting closer and closer...however, I have planned a tiny project for you to improve your writing.

The steps to follow are:


  1. Think about a disaster or event you have experienced.
  2. Make a comment on the blog explaining to your classmates what this event is about.
  3. Organise your ideas into paragraphs and write a composition:
  • Introducing the people, the place and the time.
  • Write what happened in the story. Describe the characters´feelings
  • Write how the story ends.
Some hints for your story would be:

  • Who the story is about
  • When and where the story happened
  • Events in the story.
  • The characters´feelings about the events.
  • How the story ends.
That´s all for now guys, good luck and good job!!!!



19 comentarios:

  1. Hi guys!
    I'm going to explain you an experiencie that hapenned a year ago. I missed in a forest with my father and his friend.
    This is a true history!

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  2. Hi guys! :)
    Well, I'm going to explain a true story. It happend a few years ago in summer. There was a great fire in my grandparent's summer house. And my grandpa was there, inside the house.
    See you!

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  3. Hi everybody!
    I'm going to tell you a really scary story about something that happened to me in a summer camp few years ago. Are you ready to listen them?

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  4. Hi guys!
    I´m going to explain a true story,that happened a twelve years ago.
    I´ll tell you what happened yo me one autumn alternoon in my grandmother´s house.
    Bye, See you :)

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  5. Hellooo guys! :)
    I´m going to tell you a story that happened to me last summer. It was an experience I'll always remember because I get frightened. I hope that you like listening.
    See you!^^

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  6. Hello guys:
    I´m going to explain a story, which happened to me, it is really shocking. This story happened a one year ago, when my friends and me, we found with a disaster and we didn’t know that do in this situation.
    This story is very real.
    See you soon guys <3

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  7. Cintia says,

    Hi guys!!!

    I am going to write a story that happened to me several years ago when I was in Summer vacation.

    Bye!!!

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  8. Hi everybody!!!
    I'm going to explain you an experience that hapenned few years ago, when i was spending a weekend with my friends in Christmas Holidays.
    Kisses :)

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  9. Hey!
    I'm going to explain a true storie about me and an earthquake!

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  10. Hi, guys! I'm going to explain you a true story. It happened one year ago in my summer holidays.
    see you!! ;)

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  11. Hi guys :)
    I am going to explain you a true hitory in which I happen several events. It happened three or four years ago. Good bye darlings :P One kiss (:

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  12. Hi there,
    I´m going to tell you about a really story of a good fiend who was in the tsumani of China! I don´t tell a story about me because I hasn´t lived a disaster yet but I think that story is a good story.
    See you soon guys :)

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  13. Hi bro! In my redaction I'll explain how I lived an earthquake. But I have a good new... It's not real! Fortunately what I'm going to talk you is not real! 'Cause I haven't live any tragedy!
    Kisses. See you tomorrow.

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  14. Hi everybody!
    I´ll tell you an event that happened to me when I was seven.
    I felt a lot of scare.
    I think you are going to have a good time when you listen my little story.
    Bye!

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  15. Hi guys:
    I'm going to tell you a story about a traffic accident that I had about 10 years ago.
    Bye

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  16. Hi everybody!
    I'm going to tell you a not-real story because in my life didn't happen any disaster.
    It's about an avalanche which happened in the Pirineos to some explorers a few years later.
    It's a scary story so I think that you will enjoy it.
    See you soon!

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  17. Hi everybody:
    I´m going to tell about a false story.
    It´s about a earthquake.
    Bye.

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  18. Mario Corral says,

    Hy guys!:
    I am going to write about a experience which I lived when I was at primary school.
    I ate rate poison and I had to go to the hospital.
    Bye boys and girls.

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  19. Hi guuuys!
    I'm going to write a not-real story about thiefs and police, because I haven't lived real disasters and I like crime novels.
    See you tomorrow,
    Lucía del Amo.

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